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Wednesday 30 August 2017

the best holiday ever

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  1. I really love your story, because it has detail, that is so nice of you to think of your family! well done Mata keep up the good work:)

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  4. Hi Mata I love your story about your Holiday at Rarotonga.Have you been to Rarotonga before? or have you been on a plane? ohh and i just remembered today is September the 1st.So it is today i hope you enjoy your holiday at Rarotonga

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  5. Hi my name is Mataio Kurtas. I like your story about your holiday at rarotonga. I like the way you used your family in your story but I think you could of used more word in your story have a geat day.

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